very nice, I can see feathers swirling in the air
A wonderful Elegy on "Feather". Well done.
The feather's flight over it now must catch a ride on the wind...like this one a lot!
I can picture these feathers just waiting...lovely haiku.
waiting for the winds -- love the image, love the alliteration
Waiting for the wind - good image!
the vivid imagery makes me smile.
...and the wind will sweep them away...Featherless Pomegranate
very nice, I can see feathers swirling in the air
ReplyDeleteA wonderful Elegy on "Feather". Well done.
ReplyDeleteThe feather's flight over it now must catch a ride on the wind...like this one a lot!
ReplyDeleteI can picture these feathers just waiting...lovely haiku.
ReplyDeletewaiting for the winds -- love the image, love the alliteration
ReplyDeleteWaiting for the wind - good image!
ReplyDeletethe vivid imagery makes me smile.
ReplyDelete...and the wind will sweep them away...
ReplyDeleteFeatherless Pomegranate